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Title: Bonfires 3/14
Pairing(s): Ohmiya, Ohno/Arashi
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Do. Not. Own. Unfortunately.
Wordcount: 762
Summary: AU: On a rainy day, Nino seeks shelter in a doorway where he meets Ohno Satoshi. Who was he to know that his life wouldn't ever be the same?
Author's Notes: It's still silly, but I still kind of like it. ALSO, I ATTEMPT HUMOR. You're seriously warned.

Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 |

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Chapter 3 – In which the awkward morning after fails to appear, seeing as it’s actually late afternoon

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Nino didn’t think it was entirely fair that Ohno could look so sleep mussed and rumpled and still be the most attractive man in the entire universe. By comparison, he knew that he himself suffered from severe cases of morning breath and bed hair, and that there was no cure.

He could only for hope for a quick and painless death.

Nino didn’t think it was fair either, that even after three times, doing and being done, he still wanted more of Ohno.

But instead of saying that, which would make everything a lot more awkward than the comfortable silence and afterglow they had now, he opted for saying, “Fish, really?”

Ohno nodded solemnly and launched a detailed explanation of the difference between two kinds of fish that Nino hadn’t ever heard about. And when he got tired about hearing about lures and boats and poles, he did his best to remind Ohno what Nino knew he could do with his pole and Ohno shut up after that.

At some point, though, Ohno got up and got severely overdressed for Nino’s taste (“It’s just boxers,” he said, but Nino pouted anyway,) but when Ohno returned with food, Nino kind of forgave him, because really, Ohno had made him hungry.

Ohno watched with amusement as Nino forked down the entire plate almost without breathing pauses.

“You eat faster than I do,” Ohno said with apparent wonder.

Nino raised an eyebrow. “You just make me hungry, got a problem?”

“Only with your mouth,” Ohno replied and took the plate from Nino before Nino could throw it at him.

When Ohno returned, and Nino without any restrictions or hesitation pushed Ohno’s boxers off again, Ohno didn’t even react other than letting himself fall on Nino.

“You’re fat,” Nino complained and pinched him, but really, Nino thought while his mouth watered, Ohno’s lean body was anything but.

“So very,” Ohno agreed and then looked as if he was thinking. “I should get down to the gallery.”

“No,” Nino said, as if it was obvious. He pointed at his sheet covered crotch. “You’re not going to take care of that?”

“I’m a bad host,” Ohno said and shrugged, but he snatched the sheets away anyway.

“Your mother would be so disappointed,” Nino scolded and all blood rushed south.

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Nino finally left Ohno’s place in late afternoon, grabbing his stuff and getting kissed senseless before he stepped out of the door, and when he got home (it was slow because he flat out refused to limp, even if it was only a little, because Ohno had taken impossibly good care of him,) he groaned when he saw his phone light up angrily.

Probably just his sister, who had heard from his mother, that he was on his way to return an umbrella to a pretty man. Damn gossipers.

He dropped his stuff on the living room floor and walked slowly to the bathroom, taking a good look at himself. If it hadn’t been for the fact that Ohno had looked thoroughly fucked when Nino had left, Nino would have been disappointed that he himself did. But Ohno had looked entirely debauched and Nino could only grin when he spotted a deep, angry red mark Ohno had left on his neck. Okay, marks.

It would be hell to cover tomorrow before he went to work, but damn if it hadn’t been worth it.

He took a quick shower, because the one he had grabbed at Ohno’s place had been anything but cleaning, and he felt kind of smug about that since Ohno hadn’t been expecting it.

And Nino kind of wondered why he felt no qualms about spending the night, well, day, rather, in bed with a man he didn’t even know the given name of. Well okay, Ohno didn’t know Nino’s either, so that balanced it out. Anyway, Ohno was fine as hell and who was Nino to complain if he got wined and dined (and bedded) but in reverse order?

Hell no.

He stepped into his bedroom, fell on his bed and fell asleep, dreaming of yelling phones and dark, warm eyes and boats with dancing forks as sailors.

In the early, unrelenting morning light when his alarm rang, he cursed himself and his phone that still looked angrily at him, and he stepped through the living room, stopping when his gaze fell on the stuff he had grabbed yesterday before he left Ohno’s apartment.

He laughed out loud when he saw the handle of the damn blue umbrella poking out from his bag.

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/Tbc

AN: And so chapter three came and went. Chapter 4 tomorrow! Still, thank you for awesome and lovely comments, you have no idea how huge you're making my ego XD

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Date: 2009-07-14 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com
you know I've been reading ...and I'm loving every vowel and consonant every nuance and every feeling of it all!

*ILU* -hugs ... many many of them!

Date: 2009-07-14 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
ILU TOO <33333333

Date: 2009-07-14 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cris-kanaschiro.livejournal.com
I looove your writing. The humor, the love, the passion and THE marks on Nino's neck. ♥
Oooooh, love everything! ♥♥♥
Thank you for sharing!!

Date: 2009-07-14 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Awwww, and thank you so much for your ever kind words <333

Date: 2009-07-14 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ajin.livejournal.com
Let me make your ego overflow^^ I love this and for some entirely unknown reason. Normally, I need tons of plot before any mention of sex. But I'm not complaining. Can't wait for more <3

Date: 2009-07-14 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Ooooh, really? I like plot, too, I'm not reading too many pwp's, either, but this one... I have no idea XD

I'm just so glad you enjoy it :D

Date: 2009-07-14 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadow-kick.livejournal.com
I LOVE YOUR WRITING <33333
(& I love you too.)

I've had a really crappy day but this just cheered me up. *sighs happily*

Thank you so much for sharing. :)

Date: 2009-07-14 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
I love you, too ;;__;; All your amazing words to me, they mean a lot, you know.

I'm sad to hear you had a crap day, but I'm happy this helped a bit :)

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Date: 2009-07-14 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carey-chan.livejournal.com
gott ich hab tränen inden augen vor lachen XD
ich will auch von gabel-matrosen träumen XDDD <3

Date: 2009-07-14 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carey-chan.livejournal.com
ahh~~ damn~ my mind didn`t switch back languages >////<

I just said that I had tears in my eyes while reading from laughing so hard and that I`d like to dream of such sailors too XPP

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Date: 2009-07-14 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zazasukie.livejournal.com
I loved the end of this chapter ^___^b

Date: 2009-07-14 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
I'm glad!!
Thank you for reading :)

Date: 2009-07-14 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aidill.livejournal.com
Now Nino needs to go back to the gallery to return the umbrella, right? Poor him ^__~

Date: 2009-07-14 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Yes, that's such a chore, I know xD

Date: 2009-07-14 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rawambition.livejournal.com
asdfdhjkl; I love this! why am I suddenly brought back to our little gimmick game conversation from yesterday? The love marks make me so happy ^__^
and it looks like he needs to make another trip to return the umbrella, ne?

Date: 2009-07-14 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
I know, I thought about that, too, while I re-read this^^ Seriously, I want to see bite marks all over Nino's neck XD

Welllll... the next one is called 'Chapter 4 – In which Nino purposely forgets the umbrella', so, well. yeah xD

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Date: 2009-07-14 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-mbry0.livejournal.com
LOL
this was so good!
hehehe Nino went to return the umbrella but in the end he did lot of everything else than what he was supposed to ;DD
LOVE this! thank you ♥

Date: 2009-07-14 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading, I'm so glad you're enjoying it so :D

Date: 2009-07-14 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zukkoke-iero.livejournal.com
Now nino needs to go return the umbrella again...
Wat a bad boy...
XD

Date: 2009-07-14 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Yes, that really IS a shame...but makes more fics for us :D

Date: 2009-07-14 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ohmeeyuh.livejournal.com
Oh dang, Nino has to go back again to return the umbrella? That's just SO unfortunate...XDD

This makes me all smiley for too many reasons, so I'll just sit here, smiling, until the next chapter comes out~ ^-^

Date: 2009-07-14 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Seriously, Nino minds it SO much xD

Awww, you're such a sweetheart <3

Date: 2009-07-14 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilazngrl11794.livejournal.com
this is so cute and funny ♥ ohmiya ftw :D

Date: 2009-07-14 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you :D

Date: 2009-07-14 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] risuw-chan.livejournal.com
doing and being done
so they switch huh?

looking forward for tomorrow XDDDD

Date: 2009-07-14 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Yes, they switch.
I highly approve of seme!Ohno, and I see him as top most of the time, but I think that they'd do what feels good, and not be bound by top/bottom.

Thank you :D

Date: 2009-07-14 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jamasunda.livejournal.com
*KEYSMASH* ASSDFSDFS;DFS;DFSDFSFDS

♥♥ I think my favorite bit is the "doing and being done" 8D
*has nice thoughts*

Date: 2009-07-15 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
:D :D :D

Glad you approve :D

Date: 2009-07-15 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daisuki-dkzen.livejournal.com
so...good... *ugh* any ohmiya sex is good sex. mmhmm mmmhmm.

I like this version of ohno. less dreamy and more aggressive. yummy!

MOAR!!! *rawr* LOL!!

Date: 2009-07-15 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Yay, so happy you're enjoying it :D

Thank you!!

Date: 2009-07-15 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] haruchaan.livejournal.com
OH MY YAY "done and being done" Oh gosh Nino~! XDDD *Floating on cloud 9* XDD
I totally love your forward and aggressive Ohno. Its beyond awesome. Seriously.
"He laughed out loud when he saw the handle of the damn blue umbrella poking out from his bag."
>D HURRY AND RETURN &hearts XD

Sorry I just got excited on my own....

Date: 2009-07-15 07:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
*snicker* People seem to like this version of Ohno xD

Yes, he should return...and he will, in next chapter XD
Thank you :D

Date: 2009-07-15 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asiangreencake.livejournal.com
ahahaha
Nino was too into Ohno that he forgot to give the umbrella back XD
Oh well. At least this makes an excuse to go back to Ohno XP

Date: 2009-07-15 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Of course he forgot, or I wouldn't have a fic to write XDDDD

Thank you for reading :)

Date: 2009-07-15 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] livelovespeak37.livejournal.com
i love this fic! nino is so snarky XD

can't wait to read more ^^

Date: 2009-07-15 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
I'm glad you like it!! Thank you for reading :)

Date: 2009-07-15 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ct-zahra87.livejournal.com
I love reading thsi series...
thanks alot for sharing...

Date: 2009-07-15 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading :)

Date: 2009-07-15 06:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuri-senritsu.livejournal.com
hahaha ah the convenience of forgetfulness.

I can't say how much I love your writing~~! <3 Thanks again!

Date: 2009-07-15 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Nino's memory is helpful at times xD

Thank you!!

Date: 2009-07-15 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maibachan.livejournal.com
This made my day ^_^
The humour, the smex - the umbrella!! Man, I totally love that umbrealla :P
Thank you!!

Date: 2009-07-15 07:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
I love the umbrella, too XDDDDD

Thank you :D

Date: 2009-07-15 09:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ulilulelo.livejournal.com
done and being done, so they switch huh ??
this is funny >_>
next! XD

Date: 2009-07-15 10:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Yes, in my perfect world, they switch accordingly to what they feel is good. In my world, Ohno is top most of the time, but Nino can definitely top, too.

:D

Date: 2009-07-15 11:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cherry-armrest.livejournal.com
and he didn't even return the umbrella... so he should go back again, yes? Image

Date: 2009-07-15 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
*nod nod* He really should!!

Date: 2009-07-15 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] varziel.livejournal.com
UMBRELLAS AGAIN 8D
damn, now blue umbrellas will never look the same to me.

yay, can't wait for tomorrow! love this series, let your ego overflow darling <33

Date: 2009-07-15 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Umbrellas are a must!!

Ooooh, soon my ego and I won't fit through doorways xD
Thank you!!!

Date: 2009-07-17 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheranino.livejournal.com
the marks,...
never write an Ohmiya series without including that sacred word...

Date: 2009-07-17 03:55 pm (UTC)
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