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Title: Avow (III)
Series: Stars
Pairing(s): Suggested Ohmiya
Rating: PG-13.
Disclaimer: Do. Not. Own. Unfortunately.
Summary: AU. It's a time where Gods and magic is tightly entwined and Nino is coming of age. 
Un-beta'd.
Author's Notes: Third installment. This one is longer...and this is my favourite piece, yet. For Suvi, because I love you.

*

Nino’s fingers clenched tightly in Jun’s sleeve as he watched Ohno.

 

Ohno was clad in deep green robes and he walked close to the wall, a thin vial of blue glass in his hands and a look of concentration on his face. He walked past close to where Nino and Jun were seated and then headed into the middle of the temple, holding a thin vial of blue glass in his hands. He bowed deferentially to the man in the priest’s robes standing by the statue of a beautiful woman.

 

Ohno gave the man the vial and turned to bow to the statue before leaving the way he came.

 

Nino really wanted to go after Ohno, but he couldn’t very well leave in the middle of the ceremony. Sadly. It wasn’t as if he’d be missed, anyway, but you just didn’t. Leave. The. Ceremony. Period.

 

Jun smirked as if he knew what Nino was thinking.

 

Nino pinched Jun’s arm and scowled when Jun only smirked wider.

 

*
“Will you come to my coming of age celebration?” Nino asked out of the blue.

 

Ohno was lying on his back in the garden that belonged to the temple, Nino sitting beside him with a book in his lap. Ohno opened his eyes.

 

“When?”

 

“Next week,” Nino replied, feeling nervous for some reason he didn’t want to think about at the moment. “On Wednesday.”

 

Ohno closed his eyes again. “Of course I will.”

 

“It’s nothing fancy,” Nino elaborated quickly. “Just a gathering, some food and-”

 

“Nino,” Ohno interrupted softly, and Nino’s stomach fluttered. He hadn’t really got over how Ohno could say his name. “Don’t make it seem less than what it is.”

 

“I don’t want it to be something big,” Nino retorted. “I don’t want people to make a huge fuss over it. My mother is constantly asking whether or not I want this or that.”

 

Ohno looked at him, quietly, searchingly.

 

Nino continued. “Why is it such a huge deal?”

 

Ohno reached up to lay a hand on Nino’s shoulder and gently motioned for him to lie down.

 

“My coming of age,” Ohno began, “was a quiet affair. Only my closest family came to Kyoto to celebrate with me.”

 

“Did you choose it yourself? That you wanted so few people with you?” Nino prompted.

 

“It’s…not exactly normal to hold large festivities when you’re in the service of the Gods,” Ohno explained. “If I wanted to, I could have come back to Tokyo and celebrate all I wanted, but that’s not how I saw my coming of age.”

 

“But didn’t your parents object?”

 

Ohno smiled wryly. “My father wanted a big celebration, but my mother knew that I’d be happier by staying in the temple. I wouldn’t know half the people anyway, if I came back.”

 

“Hmm, at least I’ll know the people coming,” Nino said a moment later, then raised an eyebrow. “Didn’t you ever want to come back to Tokyo?”

 

Ohno blinked against the blue sky. He folded his hands under his head. “Not really. Not until now, anyway.”

 

“Did you really only come because the position was open and it’s closer to your home?”

 

“It is closer to home,” Ohno agreed, “but no. I did have another reason to come here.”

 

“What?”

 

Ohno smiled faintly. “The stars,” he said with the same slightly glazed look in his eyes Nino noticed he had whenever he talked about the stars. “It was written in my stars.”

 

Nino knew that for every child born, there was a unique pattern in the stars. The pattern could and would change as the child grew, and just about everything could be read there. It was unclear whether or not it was possible to read specific occurrences, accidents, incidents or events, but it was definitely not ruled impossible. However, it was dangerous to know so much, it was a dangerous territory and a frightening power to hold.

 

Nino realized that Ohno was exactly the kind of person he would entrust the gift of reading the future to.

 

“Would you have come here otherwise?”

 

“I don’t know,” Ohno said with a little more than a breath. “I was happy there.”

 

Nino couldn’t rationally explain the stinging sensation in his heart as Ohno mentioned happiness somewhere else, not here.

 

Nino rolled on to his side, his head resting on his hand, propped up on his elbow. He looked down, anywhere but at Ohno. “Do you think that you could be happy…here?”

 

Ohno didn’t say anything for a few moments, but then he turned his head and smiled brilliantly at Nino. “I think I will.”

 

Nino found himself smiling back.

 

*
“Anything in particular you’re wishing for?”

 

Nino twinkled. Sho snickered.

 

Jun groaned. “I cannot give you that,” he said while rolling his eyes. “You need to do it yourself. Besides that, what do you want?”

 

“You’re a bit late, aren’t you? It’s in two days,” Nino grinned. He looked at Sho on his other side, who shrugged.

 

“It’s not me, it’s Satoshi.”

 

Nino’s belly warmed pleasantly. “Oh. Really?”

 

“Yes, really. So, anything?”

 

“No,” Nino breathed. “He doesn’t have to give me anything.”

 

“Ew, please don’t drool,” Jun snapped. “You’re disgusting.”

 

“He’s in love,” Sho commented mildly, “and I’ll provide him with a bucket if the drooling gets out of control, okay?”

 

“As long as it doesn’t get on my clothes,” Jun said, “I’ve finally got rid of that purple stuff Aiba managed to get all over himself and me.”

 

Nino chuckled. “One of his finer moments,” he said and deftly stepped to the side as Jun swatted his shoulder.

 

“No violence,” Sho intervened, stepping between them. “We can’t have either of you dying before you’re of age. It’d be tragic.”

 

“Horrible,” Nino agreed.

 

Jun’s lips twitched into a smile. “So, what should I tell him?”

 

“‘Surprise me.’”

 

*
“Kazunari, stop twitching,” Nino’s mother hissed while continuing to smile charmingly at the guests. “Why are you so fidgety?”

 

“I’m not fidgety,” Nino responded and ducked his head. This was so embarrassing. So many people here, congratulating him, congratulating his family on raising such a fine young man.

 

Actually, he just wanted his friends and that one other person here.

 

Get a grip, he thought furiously though he knew it was useless. Since he had met Ohno, he had hardly thought of anything or anyone else.

 

Beside him, his mother made a sound of oh really and shook her head as she wandered away to entertain. And probably tell embarrassing stories about his childhood.

 

He shuddered at the thought.

 

“Congratulations!!” Someone called.

 

Nino turned and was barely able to keep on his feet as Aiba tackled him.

 

“Aiba-chan, get off,” Sho said as he tried to pry Aiba off. Jun grinned at the futile attempts.

 

“You’re actually grown up now,” Sho said, giving up on unwinding Aiba’s arms. Nino stomped down hard on Aiba’s foot.

 

“Air,” he said desperately and Aiba looked fittingly guilty as he let go. “No suffocating me today.”

 

“Tomorrow?” Jun asked hopefully.

 

“Your attitude wounds my feelings,” Nino said with the air of long suffering.

 

“You have feelings?” Sho asked seriously, but laughed when Nino looked affronted.

 

“Nino-chan,” Aiba said and ruffled his hair. “Happy birthday~”

 

Nino looked properly at his friends.

 

And promptly hid a shy smile. He debated whether or not he should say something, when Jun’s expression suddenly turned fond.

 

The younger male leaned forward, resting a hand on Nino’s shoulder, his words of whisper; “Someone’s here to see you.”

 

Nino couldn’t help it; he quickly turned and his eyes found the person he had been waiting for. In the doorway, with guests behind him and in front of him, Ohno stood in beautiful silky dark red robes, looking a bit awkward and out of place. His hands were clutching a long thin parcel wrapped in grey cloth.

 

Nino had hoped that Ohno would come. He had hoped. If he was to be entirely honest with himself, he had feared (and kind of set himself up to believe) that Ohno wouldn’t show up. Of course, that hadn’t stopped his expectations from building.

 

And Ohno really was here.

 

He didn’t hear the noise from the guests mingling. He only heard his own pounding heart when Ohno finally spotted him and smiled tentatively.

 

He crossed the room, walked up to Ohno, and without even thinking about it, he grabbed Ohno’s thin wrist and tugged him along to somewhere quieter. Ohno’s skin was warm under his fingers.

 

Ohno looked timid when Nino finally let go of his wrist. They were standing in a dimly lit corridor, the talking voices from the guests only a faint buzz in the edge of their hearing.

 

“You came,” Nino said, sounding more surprised than he would have liked.

 

Ohno smiled his crooked smile. “Of course.”

 

He tightened his hands around the grey cloth before offering it to Nino.

 

“It’s not much,” Ohno said quickly, when Nino’s eager fingers took it and started unwrapping. Ohno’s slender hands stopped him.

 

“Later, open it when your guests have left.”

 

“Why? Is it something dangerous?” Nino grinned.

 

“Of course,” Ohno replied without skipping a beat. “If you show it to anyone else, I’d have to kill you.”

 

Anyone who had only heard the last sentence of the conversation would probably have found it disturbing how widely Nino beamed at that.

 

“I might fight back,” Nino said, still grinning, but his smile faltered when Ohno’s eyes turned serious.

 

Nino thought that it should be disturbing how intense Ohno’s gaze could be, but he only found it positively enchanting. Ohno’s serious eyes felt like they could scrutinize him, look right through him. It made his skin tingle, knowing he had Ohno’s undivided attention.

 

Ohno did a wide motion with his right arm – as if he was making a large circle in the air, the centre being Nino’s chest. Then he reached up with both hands to settle on Nino’s shoulders, and he inclined his head, muttering something under his breath. Nino felt as if a light breeze flittered through the house, but nothing was moving.

 

Ohno lifted his head, looked upwards for a moment while whispering a soft prayer. He removed his hands from Nino’s shoulders.

 

“I know that you had your ceremony earlier,” Ohno said gently, sounding oddly vulnerable. “And I know you’re not devout, but Rhera’s protection means a lot to me and I’ve asked her for protection. For you, I mean.”

 

Nino felt a mixture of emotions. He didn’t know why he felt as if he might start crying any moment, but he felt a deep and overwhelming affection for Ohno, standing in front of him and looking so uncertain and exposed. He took a deep breath that came out as a shuddery gasp, and he felt a tear leave the corner of his eye.

 

He felt marginally better at the fact that Ohno’s eyes looked a bit wet, too.

 

Nino took one of Ohno’s hands in both of his. Ohno was so close.

 

He wanted to thank Ohno, for doing this, for being here, for allowing Nino to get this close.

 

But Ohno preempted him.

 

“You don’t have to say anything,” Ohno whispered, and Nino somehow felt a certain kind of irony that it was Ohno saying that.

 

The feeling of gratitude swelled inside him.

 

Nino squeezed Ohno’s hand.

 

*
“Aiba-chan, go away, he told me to open it when I was alone!”

 

Aiba didn’t act as if he had heard Nino. “What do you think it is?”

 

“I don’t know,” Nino admitted, looking at the thin parcel lying on the table in front of him. It wasn’t particularly heavy and nothing rattled when he shook it.

 

Ohno had left rather quickly – he had duties. Nino thought he had done a good job of hiding his disappointment, for really, Ohno had been here. That thought had cheered him up.

 

“I don’t think he would mind,” Jun offered from the chair he was sitting on. “I think he meant people who don’t know him.”

 

Sho nodded his agreement.

 

Nino mulled over this. He kind of wanted to open it now.

 

The party had quieted down. Many guests had left and the ones still here let the younger people be.

 

“Do you know what it is?” He asked, looking at Jun.

 

Jun shook his head. “I have a hunch, but I’m not sure.”

 

“Open it!” Aiba said and plopped down next to Sho.

 

Nino regarded the innocently looking parcel. With a racing heart and trembling fingers, he unwound the cloth from whatever it hid.

 

A long roll of parchment appeared on the table.

 

Nino looked up briefly only to see triumph flash in Jun’s eyes. He unrolled the parchment and they all collectively gasped.

 

Nino felt shock swirl in his stomach, felt a tiny bit dizzy as if someone had knocked the ground under him askew.

 

“So pretty,” Aiba breathed and reached out to touch, but Jun slapped his hand away.

 

It was a chart. A star chart. The date of his birth was written in neat writing in the top left corner, signaling that all these lines, precise and tidy, were revolving around his birthday.

 

His eyes traced a few lines, stopping at the name of the stars written next to them, stars he had never known existed.

 

He looked up at his friends. Speechless, for once.

 

“Nino, do you have any idea how rare these are? And made especially for you?” Sho asked him seriously.

 

Nino had a feeling.

 

He looked at the chart. Ohno had personally made this for him. For him.

 

“Nino,” Jun said softly. “There’s note.”

 

Nino took the note from Jun’s fingers. (“Can I have one, too, Sho-chan?” “I don’t think so, Masaki.”)

 

“Today is only today today. Today is only yesterday tomorrow.”

 

Nino closed his eyes and smiled.
 

*
/End for this part


AN: I hope you're enjoying this even half as much as I love this universe. The next piece will probably be in what I call the B-side of this universe. The B-side will be the timeline where Nino and Ohno are in a relationship, more or less.
I don't know if you've seen the drawings I made for the series, and if not, they can be seen HERE.
Since I'm technically challenged, I can't make a banner, so I drew something instead XD

Take care of yourselves :) 

Date: 2009-02-06 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jonna594.livejournal.com
This is so freaking beautiful. I love this story, it's so different from other Ohmiya stories. AU is sometimes just as good :) Looking forward to reading the B-side of this universe <3

Date: 2009-02-06 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, it means a lot to me that you like my universe.
Thank you :)

Date: 2009-02-06 11:06 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-06 11:43 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-06 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elleipsis.livejournal.com
Amazing! I really do love this universe, and the way that the story is developing. The quietness again, between Ohno and Nino, even though I am not sure that is the right way to put it, is addicting and beautiful.

I can't wait for the next part, though I'm a little confused as to what you mean when you say timeline. Does that mean that they will just be together in that, or just events that are leading to it, even more so that the previous parts?
Lol, I'm probably being dense!

Thank you for writing, and I love the drawings that you did for it as well♥!!!!

Date: 2009-02-06 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm so happy that you enjoy it <3

What I mean... The A-side, meaning the fics with titles beginning with an A, will all be before Nino and Ohno get together. In all the fics beginning with a B, the B-side, will be sometime in the future where they are together. That was my intention from the very first fic, Afar, where I said that the fics won't necessarily be written in chronological order.
And that each fic is a oneshot, unless stated otherwise :)

I hope that made a little more sense to you now :)

Thank you so much for reading <3

Date: 2009-02-06 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] risuw-chan.livejournal.com
so beautifully written fic
i love ohno in beautiful silk robe XDDD

Date: 2009-02-08 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you :D
I'm kinda hoping that someone wants to draw him in his robes XD

Date: 2009-02-07 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] camaronzin.livejournal.com
I'm in love with this AU &hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts

It's so ...good and different and relaxing

Beautiful ^^

Date: 2009-02-08 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you like it :)

Date: 2009-02-07 01:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] font.livejournal.com
this universe is just the loveliest thing. i hope we get to see a lot more of it.

thank you! <3!

Date: 2009-02-08 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you :)
If I get my way, I'll write a lot for this :)

Date: 2009-02-07 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crafty381.livejournal.com
i adore this universe of yours,i really do =) the flow of words is so simple yet so heartwarming :) thank you for sharing it :D

Date: 2009-02-08 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading :)

Date: 2009-02-07 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zazasukie.livejournal.com
This is beautiful! It's so easy to imagine the scene...so real. And the part about Rhera’s protection and the star chart... I just loved it... and I even don't know why (really, I loved it!) ^____^b
Btw, your drawings are wonderful! I specially like Nino's one.

Date: 2009-02-08 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you :D
*hugs you*
I'm so happy that you like it!

...and I like the Nino-one best, too :D

Date: 2009-02-08 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bakakitty-chan.livejournal.com
I love it~! It was amazingly well written and I could picture everything clearly in my head X3 so cute!

Date: 2009-02-08 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading :)

Date: 2009-02-08 07:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maiaide.livejournal.com
Wow that was really beautiful. :D I'm enjoy this, really. I want to see the B-side a lot! Haha. And how Ohno and Nino's beautiful relationship progresses. And the drawings are gorgeous too!

Date: 2009-02-08 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm happy that you enjoy them :)
And thank you for liking my drawings <3

Date: 2009-02-08 11:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] satoshitomi.livejournal.com
jadaskfjlkf.

skjafaklfif.

O_____O

*dies*

OMG!!!! ME WANT MOAAR!! :D:D

Date: 2009-02-08 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
O.O!!!! Thank you :D

...but don't die ;;___;;

Date: 2009-02-08 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigfatwitch.livejournal.com
*delurks*

i've been following this series and loving every chapter. I'm not usually a fan of AU but your Stars universe is just too awesome to miss. Looking forward to more of this ^__^

Date: 2009-02-08 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
I'm so happy that you like my AU, you have no idea how much it means to me :)

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment :)

Date: 2009-02-09 12:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kanesu.livejournal.com
I love you too~
Will be back when I get home/I REALLY should go read that spec ed now.. ^^;

Date: 2009-02-09 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kanesu.livejournal.com
I FINALLY made it to read this! I read it at train on the way home and boy was it a bad idea!
I kept grinning this wide goofy smile the whole way.. You are so fluffy when you get to it~ ^___^ And also, not too fluffy. I was like *sigh* and aaaaw~ with the giving of the present -part but you had it well under control. It was beautiful, with the blessing and the wind coming and 'you don't have to say anything' and..*brimming with it's greatness*

This might just very well be one of your best works~
I think the fact that you love this universe makes me love it too.. well, yes, because I love you, but mostly because you use so much of yourself in this, I think. It becomes something that looks like it's loved.
Making any sence? I hope I didn't get it awfully wrong there. ^^;

*GLOMPETIyousurelyknowwhatIwanttosaysothatandMUCHmoreHUGGLE* <3

Date: 2009-02-12 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Fluff is not my forte, admittedly, so I'm keeping it under tight leash, lest it runs rampant xD

It's just...I just want everyone to love this universe, even just half as much as I do!

*glompetiIwouldsaymuchmuchmorebtI'minclinedtojumptobedustknowthatIloveyoutonsandheapshuggle*

Date: 2009-02-12 11:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dthnhi.livejournal.com
Dear Aiba, this AU is wonderful.

(My right arm got goosebumps at the star chart part...)

Date: 2009-02-12 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Awwwww <3333

Thank you so much, love :D

Date: 2009-02-12 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clarice-dragon.livejournal.com
wow.

i like this. <33

Date: 2009-02-12 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you like it <3

Date: 2009-02-13 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nino-arashi.livejournal.com
this story is really beatiful~
cant wait for the next chapter!! xD
<3 this fic~

Date: 2009-02-13 08:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much <3

Date: 2009-02-15 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamfadesaway.livejournal.com
oh! I can't believe I didn't see this new part until now.__.

I really like the way you just use a few words but still manage to describe their emotions and surroundings. It's so easy to get lost in the details but you keep it simple ^^
Sorry I think I could praise you more but I have to go now, my cousin is waiting for me.

The drawings! They are simple but still full with feeling. That's what I wanted to say about this chapter^^
Great job <3
*runs*

Date: 2009-02-16 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Aww, that's okay, better late than never, right?

You have no idea how happy it makes me that you like my writing!

Thank you :D

Date: 2009-02-16 07:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] holophonograph.livejournal.com
God I am in love with this so bad, and I have to say that this chapter was enchanting, the language was wonderful, portrayal of Ohno was so warming, all of Nino's feelings really coming across. I love the characters in this, and your style just blows me away.

Date: 2009-02-16 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
O.O!

Thank you so much for your kind words, they really made my day <3

Thank you so much for liking this, I'm so happy that you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2009-02-22 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cris-kanaschiro.livejournal.com
I'm speechless.
Somehow, I can't express how beautiful this fic is; I'm not used to read AU, but this one... definitely the best I have ever read!
Thank you for sharing, you're a great writer!

Date: 2009-02-22 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, you're too kind :)
I'm so honoured that you feel that way about this un8iverse, it means a lot to me!

Thank you so much <3

Date: 2009-06-18 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-mbry0.livejournal.com
aww so beautiful<3
thank you! ^___^

Date: 2009-06-26 06:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] niji-haato.livejournal.com
oh Nino... trying to act like it's no big deal when he evidently wants Ohno there. The playful banter between the guys is <3

I love, love, love this AU.

Date: 2009-06-26 08:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
Nino tries his best to be indifferent xD

Thank you, I love writing it <3

Date: 2009-08-06 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] g-esquared.livejournal.com
HOW do you make an AU like this work so well. Huh.

I AM STALKING YOU FOREVER ~

Oh and this is like, seven months after you've posted. At the time I wasn't even in fandom. BUT, just as well because now I can read all your series in one shot :D :D :D

This universe (& you) make Ohmiya so, so beautiful.

Date: 2009-08-06 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com
OH SO NOW WE'RE STALKING EACH OTHER :D

I don't care that this was seven months ago, it just makes me happy that you read it <3

Thank you <3

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