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rikke_leonhart ([personal profile] rikke_leonhart) wrote2010-03-16 02:40 pm
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Drabble: Oraya 45 + 46

Another short updateeeee~

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45.
Satoshi was laughing, and Nino blinked in wonder. This was a young Satoshi, at ease, and he was with two other persons. Nino instantly noticed the telltale dark eyes and black markings.

He saw flashes of Satoshi kissing someone, intimacy being displayed right in front of his eyes, brief images of a life Nino wasn’t a part of. He saw love and tenderness, someone loving Satoshi as much as he deserved.

“I’m sorry,” Satoshi said to someone with beautiful markings adorning their face, and the look on Satoshi’s face was heartbreaking.

He saw tears, Satoshi leaving, more tears, black clothes and a red scarf, and even more tears.

A veiled expression and a goodbye that felt final.

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46.
Nino was alone when he awoke, and a tear leaked from the corner of his eye, down past his temple and into the pillows, and throughout the rest of the quiet night, he wept for a past he knew someone mourned.

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[identity profile] haruchaan.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
DDDD:

Oh god just reading that part is heartbreaking enough.

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 01:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll have you know, I'd have been so disappointed if you weren't first xD

[identity profile] haruchaan.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 01:50 pm (UTC)(link)
MUAHAHAHA Its my pleasure, ♥ (to be the stalker XDD)

The Oraya image from this picture is SO strong..

Photobucket

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 08:53 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, yes, I agree O.O

[identity profile] jamasunda.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
NOT FIRST 8( *in class* XD >___>


DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: ♥

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
I know ;;__;;

[identity profile] guppy-chan.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
this is sad..ohno leaving someone he adored? thank u for sharing (^-^)

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you for reading :)

[identity profile] coffee-hanjan.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 02:57 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG! *runs off to read*

[identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 03:00 pm (UTC)(link)
ma....? *sniffs* - *snuggles*

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 08:55 am (UTC)(link)
*clings*

[identity profile] turtle-ai.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 03:19 pm (UTC)(link)
...-cries- ♥ T__T

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 08:55 am (UTC)(link)
*hands over tissues*

[identity profile] nira60.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 04:34 pm (UTC)(link)
it's so sad...
I really want to know more on the past of Ohno
It was lovely like always :)
thank you!! <3

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 08:56 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for reading :)

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 08:56 am (UTC)(link)
;;__;;

[identity profile] daisuki-dkzen.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
T____T


may i also add that i like that the identity of oh-chan's "lover" was kept ambiguous. ♥ im not sure why that struck me, but it did.

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 08:57 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad that you liked that part. I haven't decided yet whether or not identity will be revealed, but if it is, it'll be sometime in part 2 :)

Thank you :)

[identity profile] nino-arashi.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 01:29 pm (UTC)(link)
T__________________________T

I want to lock myself in my room and cry for Satoshi ;_;

[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I also want to curl up somewhere and weep ;;__;;

Thank you for reading :)